"The Other"
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"The Other"
poetrygirlxxx Fri Apr 18, 2008 5:19 pm
I think about
That other boy
I met long ago
The one playing his guitar
With the case open beside him
With the smoldering eyes
I could not deny
The smoldering eyes
That looked right through me
And the most beautiful song in the world
Coming from his heart
Coming from his guitar
The song that made me wanna stop breathing
Right then and there
Because nothing could ever compare
Nothing could ever be as perfect
As the melody drifting into the night
From the heart of the drifter
I could not deny
From the eyes of the boy
I may never see again
But it's okay
I heard his song
That other boy
I met long ago
The one playing his guitar
With the case open beside him
With the smoldering eyes
I could not deny
The smoldering eyes
That looked right through me
And the most beautiful song in the world
Coming from his heart
Coming from his guitar
The song that made me wanna stop breathing
Right then and there
Because nothing could ever compare
Nothing could ever be as perfect
As the melody drifting into the night
From the heart of the drifter
I could not deny
From the eyes of the boy
I may never see again
But it's okay
I heard his song
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poetrygirlxxx- Number of posts : 73
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OMFG!!!
queenofspades Fri Apr 18, 2008 6:10 pm
OH MY F-IN GOSH!!!!!!!!!!!! that is sooooooo AWSOME kelly!!!!!!!!!! i love it!!!!!!!! how the heck do you write such amazing poetry!?!?!?!?!?!!? 
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Ummm
poetrygirlxxx Fri Apr 18, 2008 6:12 pm
Well last night I had this dream About this guy i dont think ive ever seen before, He was playing his guitar. I wish i knew who he was, because he looked really familiar... 
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hmm...
queenofspades Fri Apr 18, 2008 6:15 pm
hmm..haha maybe it was a premonition! hehe that would be interesting....i really like this poem though...hey will the web site let you look at your posts?
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kinks...
queenofspades Fri Apr 18, 2008 6:18 pm
it won't let me look at mine either....i asked lucas about it but he hasn't replyed yet.....hmmm, he did say he was still working out some kinks...
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Yeah
poetrygirlxxx Fri Apr 18, 2008 6:20 pm
i knew lucas was behind this....... Hahahh just kidding. I think hes in the CIA. (Note to lucas: If you are, you might wanna delete this)
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wow i probably spelled at least two words wrong...
queenofspades Fri Apr 18, 2008 6:27 pm
Yeah, deleting that might be a good idea...i myself think he's in the secret service....or maybe intellegence....
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hehe
queenofspades Sun Apr 20, 2008 2:53 pm
the whole intellegence thing would make since, i mean he's got the cover name(Crys) and then he kicks but with computers....
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