crystal tears
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crystal tears
queenofspades Mon Apr 14, 2008 2:56 pm
Crystal tears of the sky
Writing poetry
Not knowing why
Birds singing a morning tune
Happy dreams
The sun coming oh so soon
Quiet reading in the night
Laughing silent
Screaming fright
Sunny morning of the day
Running, running
Far away
Writing poetry
Not knowing why
Birds singing a morning tune
Happy dreams
The sun coming oh so soon
Quiet reading in the night
Laughing silent
Screaming fright
Sunny morning of the day
Running, running
Far away
queenofspades- Number of posts : 58
Age : 29
Registration date : 2008-03-31
This is..
poetrygirlxxx Mon Apr 14, 2008 4:04 pm
SO GOOD!
Short and sweet and poetic
Mine are long and dull and boring
Short and sweet and poetic
Mine are long and dull and boring
poetrygirlxxx- Number of posts : 73
Age : 30
Location : Somewhere, USA
Registration date : 2008-03-31 -
LONG!
queenofspades Mon Apr 14, 2008 8:09 pm
no your poems are NOT long and boring...well the boring part anyway, they are really interesting if you ask me the longer ones are usaully better(unless it's like a haiku or soemthing....)
Last edited by queenofspades on Mon Apr 14, 2008 8:10 pm; edited 1 time in total (Reason for editing : i wrote i instead of a)
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